1. I need to improve on my editing of writing so I don't leave out words. Find secret codes on the page???????? 2. I want to figure out what type of books my mentoring group likes. This is my Diarama ReflectionMy diarama was my favourite part of term even though it had a few faults.I used greenand brown paper for treesand bushes,rocks, blue paper for a river,twigs and leaves,green rope for vines.I would change my animals size.I would make my bushes differently.At the start I felt nervous.
1. I need to improve on my editing of writing so I don't leave out words. Find secret codes on the page????????
2. I want to figure out what type of books my mentoring group likes.
This is my Diarama ReflectionMy diarama was my favourite part of term even though it had a few faults.I used greenand brown paper for treesand bushes,rocks, blue paper for a river,twigs and leaves,green rope for vines.I would change my animals size.I would make my bushes differently.At the start I felt nervous.
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